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By: Toby Bartels

Toby Bartels — Tue, 02 Feb 2010 06:12:14 +0000

Picture talk is a very elegant medium.

By: Kevin

Kevin — Sat, 30 Jan 2010 18:52:45 +0000

I like how the picture talk works in that exchange between Ma Pig and Coach. The problem I developed later was that Sheldon only spoke in pictures, which began to seriously concern his parents. Admittedly, there are no hard and fast rules in this little world. Like the peripheral existence of humans and the strange underground network of Warren Peace, the picto-speak are more aesthetically driven. Or driven by imagination. Or sometimes my odd whim.

By: Toby Bartels

Toby Bartels — Fri, 29 Jan 2010 02:27:42 +0000

I suppose that you wrote Into the Woods by itself, then only later fleshed out the surrounding world for the sequels. So maybe we shouldn’t take everything in the first chapter literally.

You could go back and fix the continuity glitches (this and the picture talk conversation between Ma Pig and the baseball team). But considering the pages that haven’t been coloured … it’s not necessary. (^_^)

By: Kevin

Kevin — Thu, 28 Jan 2010 04:15:02 +0000

Thanks, Toby! You’re right – it should have been “unfortunately.”

And good close textual reading, my fellow librarian.

I have always pictured the bunny hive as being well tucked into the woods out of sight. But the train station… that’s a “continuity problem.”

By: Toby Bartels

Toby Bartels — Thu, 28 Jan 2010 02:57:06 +0000

‘Unfortunately, their hide-out is difficult to find … unless we look for the huge complex near the waterfall (Into the Woods, page 22) or take the train (page 27 et al).

I’m just teasing. But maybe you have a trick up your sleeve!

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